A Column by Kurt Sass
Lots of Plot, Confusing Ending
As a change of pace, I have been
asked to review a short novel. This book has nothing to do with the topic of
mental health, but was written by a mental health consumer.
I must preface this by stating
that I do admire anyone who has the fortitude, grit and determination to put
pen to paper and write an entire novel, as although I have written for many
years, a 20-page short story has been my personal limit.
The story starts out innocently
enough, where the main character Samantha, who believes she has by chance run
into her former and long admired (as well as pined for) mentor, Saul. She
answers his invitation to his apartment hopeful for a romantic rendezvous, only
to be given a mystery in an envelope and a promise that all will be answered
the next day.
Mark A. Rivera |
But this is not to be, as what
follows is a series of flashbacks, cross country trips and even more mysteries.
Mr. Rivera does a very good job of keeping the reader interested while adding
layer upon layer to the intrigue. Whether it be a sudden death, remarkable
medical test results, crop circles, or time travel, we are continually kept on
edge awaiting the outcome.
Unfortunately, as much as we are
kept on edge, I was disappointed at the confusing ending. There was so much
going on in such a short period of time, it was extremely difficult to follow.
Samantha attempts to explain what has just transpired, but to quote the
character of Jack on the last page: “I'm gonna pretend I understand you.” If
the ending was laid out in more detail it would have lived up to the promise of
the remainder of the book.
I myself can easily see how
difficult novel-writing can be.
Editor’s Note: Mr. Rivera’s book is available on Amazon.com in paperback or digital for Kindle as well
as BarnesandNoble.com, and Google
Books. Any retailer can order a copy for
the customer. If you are a mental health consumer, a family member or a mental
health professional and have a book that you would like reviewed, please write
to CityVoices1995@gmail.com with “Book Ends” in the subject.